Due to copyright reasons, there is also no dialogue in book 2 sample pages, but as you can see, there are now… WORD BALLOONS!!! Yay!! Thanks to drawing the word balloons back in, the story-telling is now back to “normal”, which makes it easier for me too. Not least because volume 2 and 3 is where the bulk of the story takes place, and so has about twice as many word balloons as volume 1. Drawn word balloons also blend in much better with the organic lineart than computer generated ones, so that is a good change. What I couldn’t change is the font, which is still the ugly “Anime Ace”. Mind you, “Anime Ace” looks alright on the internet, but it looks utterly god-awful in print, and the decision by me to use it is one of the biggest mistakes EVER. But there’s no use complaining about it now - but I’ll definately use a different font for my next story!

Chapter 8 (page 11)

girls sleeping in bedroom

Chapter 9 (page 37)

Art Catalogue, and Miss Anu

Chapter 9 (page 41)

Jeanie looks at a painting

Chapter 10 (page 64)

It's raining

Chapter 10 (page 73)

Jeanie speaking to Miss Anu

Chapter 14 (page 170)

wet footprints on the stairs